Her remaining senses kick into overdrive as her eyes become accustomed to the darkness. The scent of copper assaulting her nose, the dripping sound from many taps? She steadies herself against the wall, flinching from slippery slime beneath her hands. The taste of fear but all too late. The vision before her predicts her fate.
Flash Fiction - Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy Halloween!
Happy reading and writing!
Love
KB
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bingo! great job, kb...it gets your imagination really going!
ReplyDeleteDeath looming large? that is SCARY!
ReplyDeleteKaren...?
ReplyDeleteWhere does such a sweet thing like you come up with this stuff?
Excellent job !!!!
This is definately one of the best ones today. Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...G
stop! you're scaring me.
ReplyDeleteVery nice writing though
I have a dark side ya know. Thanks for the comments. I'll stop by for a visit when I can.
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