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Friday 3 April 2009

FLASH 55 - A SOFT PLACE TO FALL

She wasn't perfect, there were many things she wished she hadn't done. Could she take back the hurt she had caused and be forgiven? So many questions she was afraid to ask. She covered herself with warm blankets and hid from the world.

'Please stay.' He wrapped her in his arms. She had her answers.


Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss - If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
Love
KB
xxx

14 comments:

  1. What a beautifully romantic 55 Karen.
    You are such a great writer.
    Thank you so much for sharing this with us all.
    Thanks for this wonderful contribution, and have a Great Week-End...G

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  2. I like a little romance from time to time! :) Nice job...

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  3. aaawww sweet 55 ;-)

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  4. Awwwwwwww, sweet, and oh so romantic!!

    My 55 is posted today...scroll down below the flower photos to find it. Come on over if you can find time. Happy weekend.

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  5. Awwww, That is so sweet . Love surpasses everything!

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  6. Loved the story. You put so much into 55 words.

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  7. i LOVE it. love can be great sometimes, can't it? :) great job, karen.

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  8. Often a warm embrace is the only answer we need.

    Great 55!

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  9. Ah I love a romantic 55, good stuff KB. :)

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  10. I can be romantic sometimes you know. Happy you enjoyed it. I'm on my way to visit you all now.

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  11. thank you for the warm fuzzy feeling Karen, beautifully written.

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