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Friday 19 February 2010

FLASH 55 - SWEET SURRENDER

The first time they talked, her heart skipped a beat.
Something about him, made her complete.
He belonged to another but still wanted her.
Conflicting emotions, her mind a blur.
She turned to another to dull the pain.
Her heart objected again and again.
She acknowledged her heart, lost her fear.
Sweet surrender, choices clear.


Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -G-MAN. If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
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23 comments:

  1. Mike Minzes19 February 2010 at 13:11

    great 55. Love is crazy sometimes.....well, most times :)

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  2. Brian Miller19 February 2010 at 15:18

    the path to love is seldom straight or without a few bumps. nice 55.

    mine is up!

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  3. G-Man19 February 2010 at 15:44

    Jeez Karen...
    What inspired this?
    hahahahahahahahaha...
    Surrender isn't all bad is it?
    You know how much I love your writing style, this one does NOT disappoint.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G-Daddy

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  4. KB19 February 2010 at 17:17

    Thanks guys.

    G - Am I beginning to sound like a broken record with the love stuff?

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  5. smarmoofus19 February 2010 at 18:39

    I hate to admit that I can identify with this. But I can. Oh, how I can. Well, all but the 'happy' ending. Well done!

    -smarmoofus

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  6. Whitesnake19 February 2010 at 20:00

    Sometimes fear the journey doesn't seem that bad.
    Look at what we have achieved in such a short time and remember the journey. Sometimes we forget where we are and now where we are.......

    Lovely post darling keep it up ......Ya good babe ... very good at this.....xxxx

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  7. anthonynorth19 February 2010 at 21:54

    This is wonderful and wise.

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  8. Hootin Anni19 February 2010 at 23:29

    Sweet surrender indeed.

    TIGER TEARS is my 55 this week.

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  9. inappropriatesue20 February 2010 at 00:00

    Ummmm...I can't tell you what a wonderful surprise this was to read. Lost love is so powerful. Do we ever really get over the one who got away? Great 55!

    I'm up right HERE

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  10. Dulçe ♥20 February 2010 at 00:23

    Matters of love I love!!!
    Excellent one!

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  11. Anonymous20 February 2010 at 01:30

    Damn love...so confusing, so alluring. Nicely done.

    I'm up here:

    Friday Flash 55 ~ Know

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  12. Toadee20 February 2010 at 02:33

    Wonderful writing and moving sentiments.
    Of all the weeks when I feel moved to write a 55 I have to chose this one and then have a very similar theme to you
    http://therealtoadee.blogspot.com/2010/02/flash-55-ring.html

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  13. NR20 February 2010 at 04:23

    Nice...but something or rather many things about her will make him incomplete...lol!!! Woman u know how difficult they r...lol!!

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  14. PattiKen20 February 2010 at 05:26

    Love-ly! To quote Scotty, "You can't change physics, Captain."

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  15. Charlene Amsden20 February 2010 at 06:19

    Love can be both bitter and sweet.

    quilldancer.com

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  16. Maude Lynn20 February 2010 at 11:47

    This is excellent!

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  17. Yvonne Osborne21 February 2010 at 09:15

    Hi,
    Your 55 is sweet. Ah...the ways of the heart.

    I'm playing, just a little behind!

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  18. NR21 February 2010 at 23:24

    Ahan...very nice..its awesome Karen!!

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  19. KB22 February 2010 at 20:41

    Thank you all so much!

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  20. Ronda Laveen24 February 2010 at 07:32

    This was a lovely Flash 55, KB. So clearly showed the conflict in emotions and relationships. Saw you stopped by my blog today. Thanks.

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  21. KB24 February 2010 at 10:14

    Thanks Ronda

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  22. Ronda Laveen27 February 2010 at 20:24

    Great story and picture, KB. I'm still laughing.

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  23. KB1 March 2010 at 16:37

    I take it you put this on the wrong post *giggles*

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