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Wednesday 6 October 2010

Together




Dreams of you
and me together.
Souls entwined,
for now and ever.

Candles lit,
music playing.
Red wine flowing,
bodies swaying.

Probing tongues,
exploring mouths.
Hands and fingers,
heading south.

Clothes are falling,
skin exposed.
Senses awaking,
from head to toes.

Lost in each other,
bodies entwined.
I am yours,
you are mine.

Coming up...30 Days of Me - Day 5

Love KB
xxx
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32 comments:

  1. Desert Rose6 October 2010 at 11:10

    How sweet KB :) wish you all the happiness there is..always..lovely one shot :))

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  2. anthonynorth6 October 2010 at 11:17

    Beautiful words.

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  3. KB6 October 2010 at 11:27

    Glad you likey :)

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  4. Anonymous6 October 2010 at 12:00

    Beautifully passionate OneShot post! So sweet, very nice writing! ~April

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  5. KB6 October 2010 at 12:10

    Thanks somuch.

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  6. Ben Langhinrichs6 October 2010 at 12:34

    Nice and saucy, as you say. Love's a wonderful thing, especially when you can express it so... physically... with your special someone.

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  7. Asobime6 October 2010 at 12:42

    sez it all...LOL!

    Right to the right spots!!

    Lady Nyo

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  8. KB6 October 2010 at 12:43

    Thanks you two.

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  9. Brian Miller6 October 2010 at 12:56

    whew is it hot in here...smiles. sounds like you got no problems in teh romance category...smiles. nice one shot!

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  10. KB6 October 2010 at 13:00

    LOL! Thanks Brian.

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  11. dustus6 October 2010 at 14:36

    KB, you build a real nice flow with passion. Nice One Shot!

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  12. Chris G.6 October 2010 at 16:21

    Sweet poem, with just the right bit of spice. Flows, to such romance!

    Lovely One Shot!

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  13. KB6 October 2010 at 16:25

    Glad you liked it, Chris.

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  14. moondustwriter6 October 2010 at 16:48

    So glad for the happiness that shouts all over the page - LOVE!!!


    Glad you shared your joy with One Shot


    Moon smiles

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  15. PattiKen6 October 2010 at 17:02

    That is such a charming expression of love and passion. You guys have got it all going. ;-)

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  16. G-Man6 October 2010 at 18:31

    Karen...
    You are so Hot!
    Loved your verse....G

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  17. Shashidhar Sharma6 October 2010 at 18:40

    Very nice and sweet flow.. I loved the way you softly brought the reader to feel the passion...

    I am now onto reading my 4or 5th of poems in this one shot Wednesday, which is, as you said, "Saucy" ones.. wondering is it the Autumn effecting the poetic soul...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  18. Emmanuel Ibok6 October 2010 at 21:39

    Wow!...lovely image painted with words.

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  19. Anonymous7 October 2010 at 04:01

    That is brilliant. Loved the developing imagery and the theme. :O)

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  20. Claudia7 October 2010 at 04:35

    uuhh - i feel a bit like an intruder here....smiles...so...ssschhhh...will sneak out very quiet to not disturb you...great one shot!

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  21. Bubba7 October 2010 at 05:39

    Sensual and intimate - nice One Shot!

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  22. Beachanny7 October 2010 at 06:06

    Good idea, keeping track of days by poems. This will hold that moment because like all moments they fly away and without souvenirs, they disappear. Thanks, Gay @beachanny

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  23. River7 October 2010 at 07:04

    I believe you are with your soul mate, sweetie. :)

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  24. Belinda7 October 2010 at 10:36

    Hot in here! :-)

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  25. *7 October 2010 at 12:36

    Vavavooom! There are quite a few romantic One Shots this week, yours included in the blush. :)

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  26. Glynn7 October 2010 at 13:41

    A fast -- and energetic -- love poem. Nice one.

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  27. Steve Isaak7 October 2010 at 13:45

    Romantic, sweet, tasteful.

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  28. ):)(:(7 October 2010 at 14:37

    KB that is really good loved reading it :)

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  29. KB7 October 2010 at 16:21

    Thanks so much everyone.

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  30. Whitesnake7 October 2010 at 19:05

    Oh this is so beautiful........babe XXXX

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  31. Marshy8 October 2010 at 09:01

    whilst reading this..the photo of you hugging, i believe your partner, is seen on the left hand side..i could feel the love in this..nice one shot..cheers pete

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  32. KB8 October 2010 at 13:13

    As are you MrSnake.

    Pete - you are correct. Thanks for feeling the love.

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