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Monday 21 February 2011

Microfiction Monday - Choices



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She releases the door handle, walking bravely down her chosen path. Footsteps echo, sweet promises made. Some doors should remain closed.


Have a great week.
See you tomorrow,
Love KB
xxx

35 comments:

  1. Oh, great one for the day! I think that long, empty hallway whispered some of the same things to a lot of us! Hope you have a wonderful week!

    Sylvia

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  2. I had similar thoughts this week. Glad you're back. :O)

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  3. I read it but I don't get it! What's a Microfiction?

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  4. Ooooh! I like! Great way to start out the meme!

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  5. Oh, this long hallway is pregnant with symbolism. I really like your interpretation of it--keeping some doors closed as one moves on in life!

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  6. keeping some of your past doors shut and locked works out the best.
    Liked what you saw in the picture.
    Have a great weel!

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  7. Great cadence to these lines! Enjoyed it a lot.

    Have a great week.

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  8. Love it Good to keep some doors locked

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  9. Awesome. Made me want to find out more about her journey and what should be locked away. Good job.

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  10. Ooh, a mystery! I would read this!

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  11. Uh oh, lets don't go there there! Some places should be off limits.
    Good (bad) thoughts, KB.
    ..

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  12. I wonder if she'll change her mind halfway along!

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  13. Welcome "home"!

    "Some doors should remain closed," said KB's microfiction.

    Some windows, too, as I recall--> My Senior High English teacher use to always say, "Close the window or influenza." Nobody ever knew quite what the guy was trying to get at --and being that his exams were much like his one-liners, it's a miracle anyone ever passed his class. LOL!

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  14. Great post for this pic. Gave me a slight chill. Good job!

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  15. should remain close to prevent ppl from heart fail.. good one!!

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  16. Sweetness and warning walking hand in hand! A great take on the prompt!

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  17. Great post! Love the imagery :O)

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  18. Hi KB, Just found your blog and agree, some doors should remain closed. Please consider signing on as a follower on my blog and I will do the same. Can't wait tor ead more blonde ramblings :)
    http://lindaoconnell.blogspot.com/

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  19. lotta doors to shut- thanks!

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  20. welcome back to Microfiction. A good return!

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  21. KB...
    I Loved this story!!
    Deep and meaningful.

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  22. How very beautiful....poetry in prose!

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  23. Indeed the mystery remains when they are closed :-)

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  24. Great micro! I wanna work up the courage to do one one day.

    xo

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  25. Great MM. Love "some doors should remain closed", it gave me a bit of a chill.

    My MM: Escape

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  26. This one made me want to know where she is going...love the mystery here. Good one!

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  27. Welcome back KB, sometimes some doors should never be opened once they are closed. WOnderful Microfiction.

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  28. Thanks everyone.

    Wynn - we write a story about the pic in 140 characters or less. Follow the link on my post for more details :)

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  29. Ohh--now I wonder where she was going to go! Enjoyed this. Cheers~

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